redeton This would look nice on a T-shirt!
This would look nice on a T-shirt!
it was supposed to be on a T-shirt, still want one
Merry Hanukkah? this is the most un-jewish greeting I've ever seen.
yes it indeed is
Why sometimes they have fingers and sometimes they don't?
Because I tend to draw like that, and I find it a lot quicker sometimes
The are several prominent flaws in this illustration. If I were to assume the character's anatomy based on this illustration, I'd get approximately this:https://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/5d2f8ad084eee22f5fe8b1a7ad5070d5
The length and size of the limbs (especially the arms) is blatantly unequal. The right arm looks a lot bigger, and also longer than the left one. The knees are placed very low. Almost looks like the legs are Digitigrade (in my opinion, at least). You should place the knees higher up. When drawing legs, don't draw the two of them next to eachother like this when the character is facing 3/4 of 1/2, it looks awkward.
https://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/d7750118508aea369b7fc6d0dbf63371
https://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/653c1d10849fc4eff5aab8ba2f1fb784
Also, the left leg (the one above) seems to be a bit longer than the right one.
The shopping cart is just brush strokes, and it sometimes blends with the background. Like here:https://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/5de3a97c11734f6fbe4d13dbcfd0ed23
It's kind of hard to tell if the cart is separated from the wheels or not.
You could add some more going on to the background. Looks kind of lacking. Also, the light blue above the shelves makes it look like it's outside of the grocery store. Shading isn't my speciality, but I'd reccomend you to keep the brush tool pressure consistent. Sometimes it's lighter, sometimes it's darker.
Despite the long review, I'm by no means an expert critique, so take this review however you would like to.
Have a good day!
Thank you for your feedback! I will try harder next time!
It seems the part you trouble with the most is the torso. The torsos are longer than they should be. The arms don't look well either. Arms extend all the way down to the hips or thighs from what I know. The outlines look kinda rough. It seems you made the background a bit more diverse instead of going for the generic white void, but I would recommend you to add a bit more stuff to the background, it looks like they're in the sky.
I'm in no ways an expert in critique, so you can take it very lighty, or even ignore it entirely if you want. :)
Thanks for the feedback, I always appreciate it
That's nothing compared to the amount of characters I shitted out during the last 10 months or something.
Yeah, true
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December 15th 2020 
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